Monday, June 26, 2006

A Silent Cry Comments

Rating: 3.6

I hear your voice,
Though you do not speak,
You have a longing.
Trust in love you seek.
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Lesa MRK
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Marvin Brato 08 October 2007

'I am here to help you, in my love you can rely...' is something that gives assurance of care and hope to one having a silent cry. To hear someone say this meaningful words will greatly help the person in pain and find consolation having learn that someone still care. Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing. Top mark.

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Hadi Mahdi 29 November 2006

very true... it happens with everyone, however, you described the thing well... i really enjoyed it :)

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trisha evensen 07 November 2006

Very very prettiful. love it! Trisha :) O

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Esther Leclerc 30 July 2006

Friendship, unbounded and true... Thanks for this. Esther : ]

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Ruby Root 06 July 2006

Wow Lesa, What a great poem. It really was touching. I really could relate to this poem. You wrote with deep emotion and excellent imagery. You have compassion for others when you write. Exceptional poem. Take care.

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Guarded Heart 29 June 2006

I like how you say you heard the cry, but that no one can see the tears. People on the outside want to have there say, but can't see in your heart or see what you feel

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