Life On Ice Comments
A quest for emotional provender
leaves me guided by your North Star
into wilderness unmelcoming
to my hearth loving nature
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You write words into pictures and stories that are so beautiful 'You have learned to sentinel your fires securely sheltered from any storm While I wave candles in open air daring breezes to breach their flare' WOW! Now that's fine writing Love duncan X
Hi, Mary! I love your depth and consistent analogy in this piece. To compare love relationships between men and women with ice fishing is highly creative. Beautiful job! Have a wonderful day! Beth
Relationships, particularly man/woman one can get tricky. Good write.
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6/19/2025 11:56:18 AM # 1.0.0
Interesting insight regarding different emotional temperaments.