Tuesday, May 14, 2019

Rain (Haiku) Comments

Rating: 5.0

From my debut book "Fleeting Moments: haiku on nature"

a long spell of rain
has at last come to a halt
...
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Bipasha Dutt
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Bipasha D 29 August 2020

Thank you Glen your comment made me smile

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Glen Kappy 28 August 2020

At first, Bipasha, I had a small reaction in me to the word “halt”—it has a hard, abrupt connotation. But then I had the “aha! ” with its contrast to the subtle moving of dripping drops. Good one! -Glen

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Chinedu Dike 27 May 2019

A beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing, Bipasha.

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Bipasha D 28 May 2019

Thank you for being so kind Chinedu :)

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 May 2019

A good haiku indeed, Bipasha Dutt.

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Bipasha D 28 May 2019

Thank you for your comment ..

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Kostas Lagos 16 May 2019

You caught the image of the end of raining perfectly!

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Bipasha D 20 May 2019

Thanks Kostas for reading and commenting...

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Balnarayana Bandam 14 May 2019

Dear Poet very good poem about nature raindrops drip from leaves, very true to feel and find

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Bipasha D 20 May 2019

Thank you for commenting on my poem..

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A well crafted haiku with compelling imagery.

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Bipasha D 20 May 2019

Thank you Rose for always being so kind..

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