Take My Hand And Walk With Thee Comments

Discovering love can 'thee and we' us out sometimes! Your phrase...'When you are gone I have nothing left'...the reason why this is particularly true in this poem is the fact that everything beyond this point identifies that you are grabbing for thoughts to describe the nothingness that you are left with! 'There is nothing behind where the water was left! Like a river that's gone...there's nothing else to confess. I want you back! '...that was just a poet's thought shared with another. It is a good poem! It needs your thought process to make it more dynamic! L