Wednesday, March 26, 2008

. Until That Day Comments

Rating: 3.3

War visits
too many places
traces blood markings
upon too many generations
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Mary Havran
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L G 27 February 2009

i loved your poem, the ending kinda threw me off though. the old men were once young men fighting also. i love your thoughts, but maybe consider my thought too. and thanks for commenting my poem 'million' with the hearts. it's greatly appreciated. and perhaps you could read my poem called 'collar of honor': ] i recently started getting into war movies and reading up on afghanistan and stuff. horrible; /

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Ollie Wharton 26 March 2008

Perhaps that day will come.

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