Water? Spirit! Comments

Your soul is a many splendored, and Wonderous Vapor transpired Like water through a leaf..... philisophy of some religions teaches it sometimes especially in india....... love ur thoughts. sould splendour, vapour, the journey.....raindrop, crash and burst...blood of the flowering tree, beauty, .... very nice poem. i read many times........ thank you very much for this poem dear poetess. genova