How nice was to see the love of the pigeon!
How tasty was the fruits of every season!
Now the nature is not fresh but full of poison
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A compelling and creative cry that calls us to responsible living! Well done my friend!
Gee! I saw A Real Human after long time while reading this poem, a vintage stuff! This poem is superb....... Were the civilizations destroyed without any reason? Lots of better sense has been wasted out in the horizon!
Wonderful poem my friend, i like the two last lines a lot....brilliant poem actualy.
The mission is certainly the lost objective for many and also the reason.
i will see in the poem the most striking point that the whole poem ends with the same end rhyming, till now i have not seen any in my entire life that the poem ends with the same end rhyme, have you seen? if you have seen please mention it here, i shall be enriched, thanks.
wonderful message to all mankind! we need it to think about our life, to look inside our hearts and try to ask ourself what wrong in our acts and feelings. great verse. bravo!
Great poem..... This is the reality of our own civilisations 10++++ for it